Alan, I thought you did a great job with your elevator pitch. You drew me to the idea of your business before I even knew what it was. However I feel like I don't fully understand what you are offering, based on the elevator pitch it sounded like a video game. In the future I would just include more info.
Alan,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job with your elevator pitch. You drew me to the idea of your business before I even knew what it was. However I feel like I don't fully understand what you are offering, based on the elevator pitch it sounded like a video game. In the future I would just include more info.